Hello All, I recently began a new WIP. Although I'm happy with my outline, I've struggled with the beginning. This said, I wrote two opening paragraphs. Both lead to the same place, but they take a very different paths to get there. I just can't decide which one I like better. If you have a minute or two, I'd appreciate it if you'd give your opinion. Which paragraph would keep you reading? Also, please be mindful that these are very raw first drafts. I'd be happy to return the favor anytime. Thanks in advance for your help. Opening #1 A cold chill broke across my arms when he entered the room. It happened every time I saw him. By now you'd think I'd be used to him Yet, here I sat, dreading his very presence. You see, to everyone else he was a man of flesh and blood. A man who devoted his life to treating the sick. To me, he was Doom—bringing false hope to the incurable—deliverer of tragedy, ready to do his worst. My dad and I had been con