I hope all is well with you. Aside from being innundated with snow, life is good. I recently submitted my first page for critique at Slushbusters (http://www.slushbusters.blogspot.com/).
I'm quite nervous about opening my work for public scrutiny, but I hope the comments I receive will identify glitches in my writing. After all, I cannot correct a problem unless I'm aware one exists. This said, I'd appreciate it if some, or all of you, would drop by Slushbusters and take a gander at my first page. I'll take all the help I can get(: I look forwad to your feedback (gulp).
Until next time, happy writing.