By now most of you know I entered the first page of my work-in-progress for critique over at Slushbusters http://www.slushbusters.blogspot.com/). Since it's difficult to be objective about my own work, the review proved to be insightful, instructive and oh so humbling.
After reading the good, the bad and the ugly, I revised and resubmitted my piece for feedback on Revision Wednesdays. Yes, this means I've put myself on the chopping block again. My page will be posted tomorrow. If any of you get a chance, please take a gander at the updated draft and let me know what you think. Thanks again for all the support you've given me throughout the critique process. I promise my next post will contain more industry related content. Until next time, happy writing.