A couple of months ago I entered a first paragraph critique contest co-hosted by Steena Holmes at "Chocolate Reality." Needless to say, it was an eye-opening experience. Although the reviewers described my piece as “gripping,” they also identified a point of view (POV) shift in the paragraph. One of the critiquers indicated it was difficult to determine which character owned the scene. Of course, this was not the response I hoped for. I was consumed by a rush of emotions. First came denial, I thought, w hat do they know anyway? One of the members of my writing group is an English professor and he didn’t notice the POV shift. This feeling was followed by despondence and self-deprecation, i.e., I suck, I can’t even get past the first paragraph without a problem. I’ll never be published . Finally, came acceptance. Before tackling any changes to the paragraph, I decided to conduct a bit of ...