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The Title

Hello Everyone,
I hope you are doing well.  Things are good here in my neck of the woods. Sorry it's been so long since my last post, but I've been preparing my manuscript for a writing contest.  Not only do I have to ensure the piece is polished until it shines, I also have to write a synopsis and include a title with the submission. 

I completed everything but the latter.  The plot changed in my second draft, making the working title, "The Thirteenth Baktun," obsolete. As I'm sure many of you know, creating a title that summarizes the entire novel is not easy.  I came up with a few ideas and ran them by my husband last night.  He immediately shot them down.  Either the titles didn't summarize the story, or they were overly dramatic.  I have a week to come up with something fitting, but am drawing a blank. 

Out of desperation I conducted a bit of research on the subject.  Although there are several interesting articles about creating a title, one of the most informative pieces I found was written by Alex Shapiro at Absolutewrite.com.   He says the title is very important because it is the first thing that draws a potential reader in.  Sometimes it sells a book.  Further, a hot title must be catchy and fit the genre of the story.  Some examples he gives are "The Hours," by Michael Cunningham, Or "Misery," by Stephen King.  Shapiro goes onto say that some authors use special words or characters in the title.  James Patterson did this in his thriller series, "The First to Die," "Second Chance."

I'm sure you're thinking, yeah, this is great, but how do I come up with such a great title.  According to Shapiro, titles should come from inside the writer.  Consider uising the name of a main character, or using expressions and keywords from the manuscript.  He references the Bible, poetry, and famous quotes as sources of inspiration.  Foreign words may also be useful, but they can be tricky for new authors.  He recommends the writer conduct his or her research first.  If all else fails, turn to family and friends.  Really listen to and consider their suggestions. 

In the spirit of drawing inspiration from others, I decided to open my book for title suggestions.  The following is a summary of what the story is about.  Any and all suggestions would be appreciated.  If you can't think of a title, but have a great process for creating one, I'd be open to that as well. 

Following her father's murder, Soledad Mendoza inherits a mystical weapon that was entrusted to her family by a Mayan High Priest in the sixteenth-century. With the protection of a mysterious angel, who has watched over the object for nearly a millennium; Soledad must accept her destiny to use this weapon against her father's demonic murderer, before he can win her mother's heart, then the White House.

Until next time, my fellow writers, happy writing.




Comments

  1. what is the name of the weapon? Could you use that as the title?

    I'm having the same issue with mine.

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  2. Coming up with a title can be fun but it is complex. I go for short titles, or a character´s name, but I was told it was ill-advised to use first names to describe your book. And yet (because I love the name) I would use "Soledad" in the title.

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  3. I've come up with two titles of my current WIP, am not sure which one I'll got with but I have to say, it was alot harder than I anticipated. ;-)

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  4. Angel Keep
    Mayan Angel
    To Slay the Demon
    Soledad's Angel
    Maybe one will give you an idea or point you in a direction. If the angel or the weapon have names, work with those. Good luck!

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  5. Steena, the weapon's a good idea. Though it might give too much away. I need to think about that. Thanks for the tip.

    Violante: Thanks for stopping by and welcome to Aspiring Novelists. Glad you like Soledad's name. I've received conflicting feedback about it. Though I have to agree with you. It is lovely. I thought about using her name, but am not sure yet. Thanks for the advice. I just added it to my list.

    Talei, tell me about it.(: Creating the perfect title is much harder than I anticipated that's for sure.

    Carol, great suggestions. I just wrote them down. Thanks for the help. You've got my creative juices going now.

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  6. As far as titles go… I would say: Slip of the Tung—or: Capital Punishment— or: Mendoza Files— or: Settling the Score

    Best I could do without reading your book.

    Best of luck, BTW.

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  7. Great links and great advice. Best of luck with that title!

    SarahAllen
    (my creative writing blog)

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  8. Jeff and Sarah, Thanks for the helpful advice about a title. Hey, every little bit helps.

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  9. sounds like a great book. I have a shelved book mg dealing with time travel and the Maya! I love reading about them since I know just about everything!

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